for real this time

Thu, 22 Feb 2007 06:43:09 GMT

I wrote a fic it's a threesome with a char i made up(she's not that bad) but it's mostly sasuke and naruto please check it out and tell me if it sucks http://www.fanfiction.net/~vampirepandora that's my ff.net i only have one story so check itout please and let me know if it's stupid

Shippuuden

Fri, 16 Feb 2007 19:18:10 GMT

Just like everyone else in the world well Naruto world i watched it and omg i loved it. Although pretty much we already know whats going to happen via manga but whatever you know. It's just nice to see Sakura not being worthless and Naruto and *takes a deep breath* I am soo happy *tear* If anyone cares you can read a fic i wrote called Alpha and Omega it's on Fanfiction.net my user thing on there is something i'll get it later but it's a threesome kind of. The main dish is NaruSaus

Ja Ne

Alpha and Omega

Thu, 25 Jan 2007 02:42:50 GMT

I'm going to post part of Alpha and Omega here so maybe more people will read it. That way i'll know if it's actually good. i need the truth here. *cowers* i can take it i promise.

This is my first fic I don’t mind constructive criticism. Please review that’d be awesome.

Sasuke’s POV

“Talking”

‘Thinking’

The Long Walk

Uchiha Sasuke tried to hold his head up while the jounin lead him and two others to execution.

Tsunade’s words still rang in his ears, “The elders say you three have to be executed for treason.”

Treason…….never in a million years would Sasuke have dreamed he’d be executed for treason, maybe for the death of his older brother but treason? Never.

“Hurry up” one of the jounin mumbled pushing Sasuke slightly.

Sasuke only sighed, although one of the other prisoners growled deeply.

“Put another hand on him Kiba and I’ll kill you.”

“I’m sorry Naruto I’m just trying to follow orders.” Kiba sighed.

“What would it matter Naruto we are going to die anyway.” Sasuke mumbled.
Sasuke could tell no one’s heart was in this the death sentence. They’d all grown up together there was no way they wanted to see them put to death.

The walk seemed like it was taking forever Sasuke just wanted this thing to be over.

“WAIT!” a female voice yelled, “WAIT, PLEASE STOP!”

The death march came to a halt and the jounin turned to investigate who was crying out to them.

“Sakura, is there a problem in the village?” Kiba questioned.

“No,” she said out of breath, “Isn’t there another way? What if you just say I beat you guys up and let them go?” Sakura gestured to the prisoners.

Kiba actually thought it over. “You did train with Tsunade-sama….”

“No.” Sasuke said, “If we are not welcome here then where will we go? We’d be on the run forever and I don’t want to set that kind of example for the twins.”

Naruto sighed, “Thank you guys so very much but we made a choice and we must pay for it.”

Sakura started to cry, “Please, don’t do this.”

“I think we already did.” Naruto smiled a bit. “We love you Sakura, you are the best friend we ever had.”

Sakura frowned, “I blame you.” She pointed at the third prisoner.

Sasuke moved in front of her, “This was not her doing, this was my doing Sakura and if you blame anyone it better be me. Not the mother of our children.”

Sakura collapsed to the ground, “I just don’t want you guys to die, not yet. We aren’t even thirty yet. Naruto isn’t Hokage; your clan hasn’t been fully revived.”

“That’s where your wrong” Naruto piped up, “The twins will revive it we three will live on.”

“Lets keep moving.” Choji said breaking the uncomfortable silence.

As they walked Sasuke looked to the left and saw the only road that lead out of the village. This is where they stopped this is where it would happen.

To the right stood most of the ninja they’d grown up with, elders, villagers, and the fifth Hokage Tsunade. No one seemed to look directly at them; no one could look directly at them. They were to be an example, to show the world that Konohoa wasn’t weak and it would punish any ninja who went against it. No matter what the reason. The problem with their zero tolerance policy was it meant killing these three. If ever the shinobi of the hidden leaf were all in agreement, it was now and they wanted to make an exception to save their friends.

“Uchiha Sasuke, Uzumaki Naruto, and Hiryuu Rei, you three have been sentenced to death by be heading.” Tsunade said trying not to let her voice break.

Her speech went on but Sasuke tuned her out, he didn’t really want to hear all their crimes again.

He watched a butterfly slowly gliding on the air. It was heading out of the village, he smiled to himself.
‘It’s only natural it ends where it all began'

i hope this worked. Thanks for helping me.

help

Wed, 24 Jan 2007 21:44:16 GMT

So yaaaayyyy i finally got this thing working. Now all i need to figure out how to do that thing where you post a story and then you have a link so that it's not on the main page. I wish i knew how

testing this thing out

Wed, 24 Jan 2007 20:58:20 GMT

I'm just testing this thing out see where it goes

Rei Hiryuu

for real this time

Shippuuden

Alpha and Omega

help

testing this thing out